Low Tide
June 3, 2008
Staring at her beautiful heaving breasts,
drinking the nectar of her sweet dreams’ smile,
amused by the whims of her delicate silhouette,
he slept in a confused solitude.
A lifetime he had spent in the closed eyes, hoping
to find a longing in the depth of their blackness,
searching for a search in return.
As every turn of the hourglass stained
his inebriation with cold splashes of blood
familiar in its vanishing warmth,
accouchement resembled a dank prison floor;
silences began to lose their tranquility and spat out,
in spasms, the violent desolate.
And excavated reasons only pricked him
like a rare cactus in that barren landscape.
In scattered tangibles within those spaces
he wept in a disturbance, alone.
© 2007 Ritwik Banerjee
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Entry Filed under: Poetry, art, life, literature, pain. Tags: loneliness, poem, solitude.
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1.
Life's Elsewhere | June 3, 2008 at 4:12 pm
That’s strange…the way blood surges up after the first stanza.
And the all-encompassing despair…
Strange…I’d have written that
Reply: Thanks Anindya. I promise to deliver something better the next time!
- ritwik
2.
Nikhil | June 9, 2008 at 11:54 am
Very nice! I like the play on words and the imagery… good one! jeep it up!
Reply: Thank You Nikhil for your encouragin words.
- ritwik
3.
dibbasatya | June 11, 2008 at 7:00 am
can u teach me to write poems like you?
Reply: I would rather not do something as nasty as that! . . . I can, however, refer you to a few other poets who are capable of ‘teaching’. Yeats, for instance, is a great fellow!
- ritwik
4.
sea of memories | June 11, 2008 at 7:05 am
Ritwik: “I was expecting better from you”!
and I love you for exactly that!
- ritwik