Comments on: The Last Request http://arachnid.wordpress.com/2008/09/05/the-last-request/ This is where I share all my intellectual cerebrations. These thoughts are, more often than not, about films, literature, art, aesthetics, music and - well - some shades of other pieces of my mind. Tue, 15 Dec 2009 06:47:35 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: sea of memories http://arachnid.wordpress.com/2008/09/05/the-last-request/#comment-722 sea of memories Mon, 08 Sep 2008 02:37:34 +0000 http://arachnid.wordpress.com/?p=100#comment-722 Ritwik I know this is going to sound rather cheeky but I could'nt resist. You must know size really does not matter when it comes to poetry.! ;) <b>Reply:</b> Course it doesn't. I had this nagging feeling that it was slightly incomplete. But all that later. As of now, welcome back to . . . ummm . . . India! :) - <i>ritwik</i> Ritwik I know this is going to sound rather cheeky but I could’nt resist. You must know size really does not matter when it comes to poetry.! ;)

Reply: Course it doesn’t. I had this nagging feeling that it was slightly incomplete. But all that later. As of now, welcome back to . . . ummm . . . India! :)

- ritwik

]]> By: sea of memories http://arachnid.wordpress.com/2008/09/05/the-last-request/#comment-720 sea of memories Sun, 07 Sep 2008 14:21:57 +0000 http://arachnid.wordpress.com/?p=100#comment-720 You know what I am going to say about this one Ritwik :) "My kind of poetry". The rawness of emotions is brilliant. I like I like..... <b>Reply:</b> :) Thanks C !! I knew you would like this one. I was a little unhappy about the poem being too short, however. - <i>ritwik</i> You know what I am going to say about this one Ritwik :) “My kind of poetry”. The rawness of emotions is brilliant. I like I like…..

Reply: :) Thanks C !! I knew you would like this one. I was a little unhappy about the poem being too short, however.

- ritwik

]]> By: Fitch http://arachnid.wordpress.com/2008/09/05/the-last-request/#comment-719 Fitch Fri, 05 Sep 2008 12:20:47 +0000 http://arachnid.wordpress.com/?p=100#comment-719 "When my sensibilities follow you into a highly personal oblivion, my only request to you, amidst my weaknesses, is to grant me the tenderness of your grasp." That line alone could be a poem within itself! That is incredibly beautiful! <b>Reply:</b> I myself loved the way I ended this poem. And I don't end up loving anything about my poems that often! Great to see that you liked these lines as much as I did!! :) :) - <i>ritwik</i> “When my sensibilities follow you into a highly personal oblivion, my only request to you, amidst my weaknesses, is to grant me the tenderness of your grasp.”

That line alone could be a poem within itself! That is incredibly beautiful!

Reply: I myself loved the way I ended this poem. And I don’t end up loving anything about my poems that often! Great to see that you liked these lines as much as I did!! :) :)

- ritwik

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